Mob rule, or anarchy, is the absence of any form of political authority. One instance of when this has happened is the French Revolution. The peasants of France killed their government, resulting in no law, no one to enforce the law, and complete mayhem. Attempting to reestablish justice and order, the people asked Napoleon to become emperor. That lead right back to tyranny and injustice. So, almost every time mob rule has been ensued, no good has come of it.
But this has not always been the case in history. In the American Revolution, if there had not been mob rule, we could not have broken away from England. But, if we had not ended the mob rule when we did, we would have had another king. The people actually asked George Washington to be their king.
Sunday, November 16, 2008
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The basic layout of your paragraphs is sound and the order the information is presented is also good.
A couple of things that you need to keep in mind when you write. As Doodles will tell you you need to answer the following any time you write (Who, What, When, Where, and How). Concentrate on these elements whenever you need to write about a subject. Also, you need to provide a bit more "cultivation" to your themes. The information you provided was really good, however, there is a lack of development of the information which leaves the reader unsatisfied. This "cultivation" is a difficult skill to learn and comes with practice. I have found that the best way to develop this is by reading aloud your writing and if it doesn't sound quit right then you need to make adjustments.
Overall, I thought your writing was pretty good. Keep up the Good Work!!!
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